In Project number two my first and final drafts didn’t have as much of a difference as my future drafts did in project three. But in my first draft of project two, my thesis was different than that of the one I used in my final draft. I knew after reading over my first draft and from the peer review process my first thesis needed to be changed because it didn’t give me enough room to work with. What I mean is that it was too closed minded to the point that I knew that I needed to make it sound more open so that the reader would be able to connect with me. Next, I realized that my quotes were not as strong as they could be to prove my point and/or used in an incorrect point in my essay and would be better off implemented somewhere else to express my thoughts. Final, I observed that my first draft did not provide any counter-argument whatsoever so I implemented a section dedicated to this for my final draft. Overall, I believe this statement shows that my development in revising papers has significantly been improved due to the ways we discussed in class and by just learning from what my peers were nice enough to help explain and teach me.
